Export Rose
I wrote advertisment for my company on a catalogue, so could you please help me to correct or make it better?
Established in 2003
Produce tissue cultured plantlets in vitro
Laboratory with total area of 2000 m2 was equipped with modern facilities; capacity of 7.000.000 plantlets per year.
Nursery with total area of 1 hectare, capacity of 400.000 plantlets/ month
Produce, purchase cut flowers for export
Cool store and packing firm with the total area of more than 1500 m2; capacity of 2.000.000 stems per month
Preserved flowers
Producing firm with total area of 1000 m2, capacity of 400.000 stems per month
Trading, imporiting and exporting new flower varieties
Main products
Flower plantlets and bulbs: Lilium, Gerbera, Limonium, Chrysanthemum, Indoor plants
Cut flowers: Lilium, Carnation, Rose, Hydrangea, chrysanthemum, cut foliages
Preserved flowers: Rose, carnation, chrysanthemum , Hydrangea, Cymbidium, cut foliages
Markets:
Japan, Indonesia, Russia, New Zealand, The Netherlands, Belgium, Viet Nam, etc
Hmm, I think that you have included way too much detail for an advertising feature. Obviously, it depends on where your ad is to be placed. If it goes in a general publication, then yes it is way too detailed. If it goes into a specialist journal, it is OK but stilla little wordy.
Ads are to get people interested in your company and it’s products. You’ve got to grab their attention and keep it. Think what the main issues are and stick to them. Is there anything your company does that others don’t? Does your company offer better value for money than elsewhere? Do you provide a very high quality service over and above the normal level expected? These are the things that will get you noticed above the others.
Hope this helps! If you did just want the above ad checking over and correcting (grammatically and spelling wise) please feel free to email me!
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